Would a baby help?
Sat at home thinking,
a broken heart needs to be loved
or someone to love
a helpless innocent
would fit the job description
to love unconditionally
and be loved in return
maybe a child, would help me
be the glue to my heart
stick it back together
to make it 'unbroked'
and whole
Baby.. be mine?
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best...Quickie :) by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended November 12, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very touching and emotive piece
This just reaches the heart and speaks to it!
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest; I wish you the best!
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LOVELY THOUGH SAD!!
When one is feeling down and depressed all they have to do is reach out to children and they will be blessed with their innocence and unconditional love.
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LOVELY THOUGH SAD!!
When one is feeling down and depressed all they have to do is reach out to children and they will be blessed with their innocence and unconditional love.
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I love this. A bloody lot. That's all I have to say on the matter xxxxxx
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