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Split

A broken heart
A torn mind
Split

In two directions

right down
the middle

almost unhinged

at the end


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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    FANTASTIC!!!

    So often has my heart and mind took different directions and the coming together is never easy and sometimes just not possible.


  • Broken Machine
    September 25, 2007
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    I really like this poem. Great job with it!