colourless I thought
yet it stains every tree-top
this years Autumn wind
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I hope I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Excellent
another gem stone of a haiku coming from you. I really love this one as well because you have such a way with words that really out shines everyone else. I am not suprtised you won a HM trophy but this is just anothewr well done piece of poetry keep up the good work
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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wow and i thought the one a few back was unique, i changed my mind
this is very nice 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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This is a lovely Haiku.
Well- expressed.
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A wonderful Haiku, it leaves one left to ponder Well written thank you for your entry, best wishes, Ken IBT
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Strange how minds can collide. I very much enjoyed this haiku, the colour changes of Autumn never fail to amaze me...I had this impulse to change the last two words of this scenario, hence the minds colliding,to *acid rain*.Take no offense, none is meant
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LOL....I can see how acid rain would work in this. Maybe there is an political slogan there.
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This is beautiful...and so true! It really is amazing that color changes are caused by something colorless. This is a fine example of haiku. Great job.
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There is something very spiritual and deep here...an evelasting beauty that meets my mind. Very nice 'ku.
Charishma -
Delightfull how our minds can be lifted by Autumn winds. Or the words that colour the sky. But I had to capture and ground my zeplin last week. This weekend though had all the splendour of the season.
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