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women of my dreams

my love for you graces the sky
my heart held high for you
from the heavens you have descened
my nightmare has finaly ended

as i hold you close to my chest
my heart bursts for with life
beating faster at every secondon
can you hear it? can you feel it?

a smile spreads across this lifeless face
my arms close a little more
my head tilts to one side
a gasp of air escapes me as i look upon your face
such untold beauty in your eyes

i gaze upon yout face
transfixed upon your lips
i lean in slowly i get there
our lips press together
my heart beats faster

in our lovers embrace i hold you
but my smile soon fades
as i see you slipping away from me
dispearing into the night

as i awaken from this dream
my heart suddenly heavier
a tear escapes my eye
my angel now gone

i search the world for her
100 years i shall spend
100 times i will look
just to see her smile once again

my dreams filled of her face
as she walks along with grace
who is this women who stole my heart
i cant stand to be apart

i look in the mirror and see what ive become
my face so gloom my hands so scarred
i face up to my madness
i face up to my mistake

it is but a dream
a tale to be told
of the perfect women
who stole my soul







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dedicated to charlii keen she truely is the women of my dreams

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  • good write

    That is mushy, and lovely lol. But i'm a guy so it feels weird me saying awwww so mushy and lovely lol. But yea Great write,good luck in my contest!


  • sanity
    April 8, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwwww... mushy and lovely..... I like poems that say how you feel about someone.... OH YEAH!!!!! its my contest....lol anyway thanks for sharing.... good luck.... hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxxx