Red breast stands lone quard
on discarded garden fork
waiting for wise men
Author notes
"This is a great from of poetry that flows from my thoughts,though the picture I see is greater,I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku, write of Insects or Birds by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love it!!!!!
This is a BEAUTIFUL haiku!!
Inspiring!!
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Thank you sweetie
Glad you enjoyed it 
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Awww, the lovely finch is awaiting my return?
Must be the seeds I hand out regulary! Great imagery, form and counts, thank you for your entry, best wishes, Ken IBT
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Lol, the birds we have here steal from the dog bowls It would be no good feeding seeds as the local councils have forbidden the feeding of birds as it encourages rats...not that we have rats as we have cats who also steal from the dogs bowls
The only things that eat seeds here are the cockatil and budgies, that would also eat the dogs food given half a chance
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LMAO they don't bark by chance do they?
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A good strong haiku, excellent visuals and the subtle implication in L3 works very well.
Good luck in the contest.
Andrew
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Many thanks Andrew for your comments, as always, very much appreciated
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