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Eden

 

 

Eden

By: Mrs. Enthralling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lay back and relax in to the deep meditation of my soft grass. Let my waters of spiritual wash the residue of conditioner of our sins. I gave you me times ten when you walked upon my side walk of ride you steady but keep the pattern very nice and burn your ashes of impatient temptingly slow. The Hindu of my hips take sips of holding on to my joyful swing. Clinch my throat and taste perfume flesh in hungry man starvation. I am climaxing in shyness as my rose buds of nipples bloom. I’m moaning in voices of echoes as I cast my speal of good and bad while you marinate my mouth. Your pounding me up against the reflections of broken glasses as my evil vegtables flash. I see my self in repeat as I am skies of unlimited. Come by and visit me as the curse of contractions. I have gave you knowledge as I open you up to visit my lustful Garden of Eden.

 

 

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Author notes

~ Eden ~
Is a exotic garden full of everything that is needed
until you disobey the voices with in and dont drink from the fountains of my lust

mrs. enthralling

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  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    September 26, 2007

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    this was a great piece honey i think you did a exellent job with this keep taking care me with these gret words


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 26, 2007

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    oh dearest, you know I can withstand you, but you can never withstand my tenderness and your soft skin will know it with your contest.


  • rainbow bi trinity
    September 25, 2007

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    this was very sweet passionate and so much the wife i love and adore. who on earth can say your not great at this writing that you do. i wish you our great passion that you get a trophy its already gold to me but what ever you get cherish it as its a nice piece
    ur wife freaky

  • New-n-Improved
    September 25, 2007

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    Very Seductive

    You already know that I love this piece. This is very great. I keep telling you that you are one of the best poets alive and I mean that. I have to admit that I haven't found a poet yet that captivates me the way you do. You are Phenomenal and that is for real. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Love you.

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