morning rays brighten
peeking through the dusky clouds
starting a new day
rising high above
dancing warmth upon my skin
shining spirits soar
gliding 'cross the sky
prismatic beauty now seen
soothing colors show
goodbyes coming soon
decends horizon slowly
time to say goodnight
Author notes
Not the best with haiku, but I tried
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku or any of their cousins by Wind Walker.
1500 points, ended October 25, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Time to say Goodnight!
Goodbyes are only good when we can say Hello's once more!
Miss you my beauty!
Love your style on your haiku chainns!
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Tang
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exacting of all 4 seasons
well done and spectacular
Good Luck
B D -
Wow this certainly encourages some wonderful images to form in my mind. Sunrises and sunsets are so magical - you have captured their true essence in this poem. Not the best haiku?!? It's still a great one!
Good luck in the contest
Never ♥ -
I think you did a fine job with this chain. It presented a story line filled with a flow of imagery from start to finish. Excellent writing. Good luck in the contest
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Domo Origado
Exacting and as precise as any Imperial Japenese writer would do - each standing on their own - yet also tied together for the bigger picture
Wondefully done
Good Luck
B D -
"prismatic beauty now seen"
I think this is a beautiful piece about nature.
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