Summer's gone, Autumn is here,
leaves are falling, winter's near.
Colder temperatures, daylight short,
time for more indoor sport.
Heavy jackets and mittens too,
time for noses to turn blue.
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PROMPT: (pick ONE of the following))
-- Summer
-- Autumn
-- Winter
-- Spring
LIMITATIONS: Must be exactly 30 words and cannot contain the words ‘a’ or ‘the’.
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Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. It accurately describes the season and the rhyme works quite well, but I'm partial to want more metaphor in a poem, if you ask me.
DancingRed.
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I'm not much for metaphor or alliterations myself, although one or the other sneaks into my work occasionally, I dont write them on purpose. I'm a simple guy who writes simple poems, you wont have to get a dictionary out to understand my work.
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Fair enough.
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this was a wonderful piece which really expressed autumn and left me imaging it
i cant wait for autumn
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Wondeful piece good luck ... on this piece. As usaul
you paint a wonderful picture.
Tory
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