My room turned cold
I heard a scream.
Is some-one there
or is it a dream?
I see spiders webs
with bats that fly.
Was that a witch
I start to cry.
The pumpkins are lit
ghosts arrive today.
My eyes are blood red,
they want me to play.
A skeleton and a monster
with other creatures I've seen.
but then I just remembered.
IT IS HALLOWEEN
A contest entry
- HALLOWEEN EXTRAVAGANZA - Open til Oct. 31st by Little Eagle.
9800 points, ended November 3, 2007, 54 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks for your entry
this is cute. All the little ghosts and goblins are out for their night of fright and fun. Gobbling up the candy and tricking their hosts. This is a sweet poem about Halloween. Nice flow and structure.
Happy Halloween
Tammy
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Very cute and practical. I love the thrill, the scare, expressed in this poem. The rhyme simply makes it even better.
Keep up the great work, and good luck in the contest.
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Fantastic!!
This is so cute, if I can use that to describe poetry. It is the sort of thing I would have read to my children when they were younger, very well penned indeed! Best of luck to you in the contest!




