The day I met you I knew I could love you.
Your eyes glistening such a bright blue.
The sun shined off your red hair with such a glow.
Red is the sign and color of love.
We were meant to be in every way possible.
I love you with all my heart and all my soul,
You make my days brighter,
And my night times cozy.
There is a place in my heart that you stand in everyday,
Even when your not here.
Lately your not here much.
I miss you every time my heart beats.
You are always on my mind even after 10 years of our hearts entwined.
My love is deeper than the ocean,
Deeper than the whole world from top to bottom.
I love you my wonderful man.
I could never ask or dream of any better.
I love Thomas.
A contest entry
- Deep Emotional Love (free form Only!) by HopelessScribbles.
525 points, ended September 27, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite me! ~~ One day only ~~ 500 points to Gold, will be judged tomorrow. by Naridill.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Submit a poem you would give to "The One" in your life or how you would treat them by PureRomance.
950 points, ended November 13, 2007, 24 entries
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Absolutely astounding poem. You did a brilliant job. The wording you chose the imagery. This is an excellent piece and exactly what I was looking for to be found from the contest I created. You did a marvelous job with this poem. Keep up the amazing job of writing and I'll continue reading. Good luck to you and your poem in this contest.
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My Soulmate
Absolutely beautiful poem. My soulmate is the perfect title that is for sure I fell in love with my husband all over again when I read your poem. The first line The day I met you I knew I could love you and then the last line I love Thomas is so perfect for it embraces the whole poem really like a lovely love song! The title is perfect for the whole poem My Soulmate. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift to write poetry. Kelle Marie, stavykm
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I feel the ending should be 'I love you, Thomas' as the pressence just doesn't fit well. The out of place context. But apart from that, it is worded beautiful and has beautiful emotional depth.
Much luck
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Breathtaking
Aww! That is so sweet! This poem is amazing! I feel the love, I feel it.
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Hmmm
I thought that this Poem was very nice.
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Love
And i must say he is one lucky guy to have a womens love & for it to be penned so eloquently... Red hair, blue eyes that was once me
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this is beautiful,love can be an awarding dream as a team,great flow and deep respect seen in this piece,good luck..mm
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