When I wanted to die, you said three magic words, I love you.
Your love surrounded me and put light into my life.
Your arms a barrier against the evil in the world.
I don't think I ever told you that you saved me.
Your kiss sent all my worries flying away.
When I thought there was no hope you saved me.
When no one else understood what I was going through you were there by my side.
Like a knight in shining armor you came riding to my rescue.
You saved me with three little simple words, I love you.
A contest entry
- I Believe in Love by Star Shine.
450 points, ended October 9, 2007, 15 entries
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so sweet, this is beautiful. Made me feel all mushy (for my beef) Very good job.
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Love, so strong an emotion to get you through that which is so dark and desperate...but battles and wins. Love your write.
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Lovely write, good luck.
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Excellent write
I loved this and understand it perfectly for their are living guardian angels about us each day . Open yourself and from day to day you can feel their wings and see the beauty all around you beauty that so many today just passes by . I love you to
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Three simple words yet so meaningful, this is romantic and clear, well-organized. Thanks for the entry.
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This poem is so nice,well formed to show how love can be ,show and tell are wonderful as it goes hand in hand,good job,good luck..mm
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