On leaves you will find
Wriggling look very close
I crawl and munch through
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.
A contest entry
- Haiku, write of Insects or Birds by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your entry
your imagery is wonderful...I hate the ones that kill off the tree's as thet devour everything Good form and counts,best wishes, Ken IBT
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I think you may have too many syllables in L1 for the contest.
I have always been a fan of the riddle technique haiku, (although I'm not very good at wrighting them).
Good luck in the contest.
Andrew -
well just leave my nasturtiums alone lol nice work xx p
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