We fell in love at first sight.
Passion over took our hearts at first light.
Our eyes met that day out by the school.
I knew you were the one for me.
I love you with every beat of my heart.
I love you passionately right from the start.
My love for you is like electricity.
When your not around my lights go out.
There is a piece of my heart that you stand in.
Your whole body and soul fills mine within.
My love for you is stronger than the toughest steel.
Nothing could ever break it.
When my heart is sad,
It's only you that can make it heal.
I love you more than life itself.
I'd give my whole body for you just for you to stay in best of health.
You are my soul,
You live inside me.
Everyday of my life you are in me.
Even when your gone.
I love you dearly, I love you strong.
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I LOVE YOU BECAUSE
A contest entry
- My Love by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended September 26, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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Honorable mention
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Thank you for your most beautifully expressed entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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loved the feeling as i read this. very nice. success in the contest
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So sweet
Thank you for entering
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A nice piece that dances around a fair few emotions. Nicely penned.
Much luck
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I was after left-alignment and freeverse, so this piece will not win here. Feel free to enter something else.
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Wow!special feelings you convey here. such deep tenderness and caring. success in the contest
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Bravo!
I love the way u express it.
GOOD JOB!!
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