I Queen of garden ambrosia
Serenade my bloom of passion
In curves exotic dance to inspire you
Soft petals tap in your secret lustful soul
Seductively flesh touch smoldering embers
Kissing my lips flower luscious dew in silky strokes
Flames desire, overpowers my senses and entice ecstasy
I breathe in perfume's breath whisper
Savoring in euphoric rhythm on exquisite flower beds
Mystically I fly on wings of paradise forever and a day
A contest entry
- Garden Queen .. Adult 18+ Picture PIF by Riftkin.
625 points, ended September 26, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
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omg gold
a million thanks. you make me want to write more.
poet
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sweet cakes you have one major hot piece here
and you know how to make me smile and you did
you are great -
Nymph of Love
Every man desires, but does not often find, such a luscious creature in their own garden. Marriage is a true garden; if it is not tended properly, it will wither and die. But with one such as this, a man would be ever attentive and never content. A solid piece of writing, good ending in the last three lines. My fav line is: "Kissing my lips flower luscious dew in silky strokes." Wow, that says a lot in once sentence! Good luck, and good writing. Walt.
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One hell of a lot better than mine! I love how seductive this is. I would make only a few changes: one, the background (my eyes just...can't stand it, and maybe that will affect the judge too...I don't know, it usually does); two, "purfume" should be "perfume." Other than that...this was hot...remarkable...WOW!!! I love how you write.
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