The desire in my eyes burns with passion
My body begging for you
No need for words
I ache to make love
please, do not deny me
I want you...
Author notes
Option 3 (though it's not really "dirty" )
Heavenly Angel
A contest entry
- Not a quickie! 10/30/30 (ADULT 18 or older) by jasminerose.
700 points, ended September 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice nice nice
i loved it
the pic is awsome to i wish i could draw that good-.O -
This is good!! Very dirty if you use your imagination Great write and good luck in the contest!
Leslie -
Such a beautiful yearning passion poured from your pen in this one!
Beautiful take off the prompt!!
Thank you for entering my contest!!
Jazzy
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Great write. So erotic and seemed full of passion. I liked the third line the best. It made me think of how sometimes people don't need words with a loved one, they can understand each other depending on how long they have been together. Good luck in the contest.
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wonderful
Oh my this is so erotic and powerful. Best of luck in the contest. -
Well darn girl! This is so hot and passionate....so strongly put and straight to the point....great job here...best of luck to you...smiles, Terry
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... and here I thought I could handle something erotic by you. Nope, I was wrong! Five lines, and I'm in a different world. And the picture made it worse! You're such a bad girl... I love it!
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A beautifully soft seduction. Raw passion is not always wild and raunchy. Your write proves that inhibitions can very well be gentle, caressing, loving and with whispered intensity. Great take on the prompt. Best wishes in the comp
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