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Buzz off. [haiku humour]

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beautiful, buzzing
why hasn't honey got stripes
sting in the tale

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Author notes


I took these pictures in my garden.

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  • Melodies
    January 3, 2008

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    OOOOOOOooooooooooo!!

    SO VERY pretty! Love your garden, I do! Sweetly said with a big smile! Fine haiku and so PRETTY!


  • DrunkenRam
    January 2, 2008
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    Cute last line.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 9, 2007

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    Nice

    this is a vety different type of poem but it is very well done as well,. what I really like is the cool picutes you added and the unique wording and depth through out this poem. keep up the good work and congrays on the trophy


  • Blueskywonder
    September 28, 2007

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    lol, you is a funny thinking individual poetesse and i like it!

    Excellent haaiku


  • aliceramone
    September 25, 2007
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    interesting with good twists

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 25, 2007

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    Yes a bit of humor never hurt anyone, or has it? Good question, why doesn't honey have stripe Thank you for your entry, great thoughts, best wishes, Ken IBT

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