Frantic Fire

Excited, she met me at the garden gate
in a sexy, hot, nimble lustful state

every sauntering step provoking temptation
she entices lurid juicy come-hither intentions.

Passing the last manicured flower bed
where secluded, there is an old shed
deep in the plush green secret garden
her alluring appetite to be fed, I harden.

Bent over spread beckoning hips shifting
throbbing hard pushing flood gates lifting, ecstasy

Author notes

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Silver trophies • next in list

A contest entry

Garden Queen .. Adult 18+ Picture PIF by Riftkin. 625 points, ended September 26, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Lady Dragonwyck
September 27, 2007
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Very sexy write. What fun in the garden. Congratulations on your Silver Trophy.

Lady D
Riftkin
September 26, 2007
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those flood gates sound more tempting than anything else
dustookie2
September 25, 2007

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So the passion of temptation lures you into the garden your words paint the picture just as alluring as the prompt. Flows easy off the page you leave no doubt of the ecstasy Nice one HH good luck in the contest.
MyOwnAbuser
September 25, 2007

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I like how it went, but the end was a little strange. I liked the beginning allot, good amount of detail.