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Entangled Friendship

Tiger's eye friendship
bound by gold particles
sent orbits drifting,
over valleys of daisies
dancing on petals joy,
with starry eyed poetry;
long drifters we have been
always at different docks,
shipments of empty packages
and thoughts,
bound by chance once more,
gifted and flattered,
growing like twines
entangled in moments of need,
gathered and created,
forever as friends


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  • DancingRed
    September 27, 2007

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    This is a very lovely poem that depicts the joy and love of friendship. Your metaphors are great.
    You didn't use the word 'poetry'?

    DancingRed.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 25, 2007
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    i love all your flowers,,great and tender xxp