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Chorus of Anguish

A distant bumbling
Bees sing softly in meadows
A chorus of woe

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  • Misery into Melody
    December 1, 2007

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    wow it's amazing how three lines can have so much meaning
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    yea i was right
    i'm sobbing
    i absolutely love your poems

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Oh I like this Haiku But to me it should have a gold trophy on it instead of an Hm Maybe a judges error.Good piece.Much love


  • Broken Machine
    September 25, 2007
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    I like this, short and simple. Great job!


  • autumns rising
    September 25, 2007

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    I'm not really that big of a fan of haiku's but some of them are great, like this one. Pretty imagery and good wording. Great job

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 25, 2007

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    Wonderful Haiku A distant bumbling..great imagery you have presented and I think I'm getting the heck out of here as they are swarming Thank you for your entry..best wishes, Ken IBT

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