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Butterflies

Wily butterflies
Suck buddleia branches dry
no wonder they cry

A contest entry

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  • Aurora Ceres
    September 25, 2007

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    Wow! Haiku is not so easy much less a rhyming one. Beautifully done Donald. Best of luck to you in this contest.

    Bella

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 25, 2007

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    LOL thank you for your entry..great imagery ..how do you see such small tears? Best wishes, Ken IBT