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silent soul

up in trees they hide
small eyes gaze over the green
warm balls of feathers

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"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 25, 2007

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    Awwwwwww, great imagery..I can almost see them peaking, hope they don't fall out Good form and syllable count...thank you for your wonderful entry...best wishes, Ken IBT