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Cover Me

Cover me with ignorance
So I can finally find my place.
There is no room for correct obsevations here;
I have accepted that fact of your ilk.
You want to ruin your home with poisons?
You want to let inferior people rule?
You wish for
Disease,
Death,
and Destruction?
Fine; It is your lives at stake,
I will be long gone when your extinction comes.
So cover me with ignorance,
So I can live out my remaining days on this planet
In happiness.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 16, 2007

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    Quite Nice

    I really like this take on your poem and how you incorporated it into the contest and it bites the contest holder did not agree but I thought this poem really rocked and that is was an excellent all round poem. any ways very nice work and keep it up Signed, Paul

  • Michael A
    September 27, 2007

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    wow

    certainly a different take, didnt expect this. the power and controlled anger was very good. thanks for sharing.