A Bird

Overhead I see
Pretty pink feathers flutter
A bird, such beauty!

9/25/07

Author notes

This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.

A contest entry

Haiku, write of Insects or Birds by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts. 600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Turn those greenies to Gold (or silver or bronze) by whispernthedark. 440 points, ended February 2, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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SmokinHotWhiteTiger
October 9, 2007

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Beauty
Beaut is the eye of the beholder s what comes to mind after reading this poem and I enjoy the whole Haiku style you packed it into. very nice work and kepe it up
InBetweenThoughts
September 25, 2007

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Beautiful images you have brought to mind Resident of Flordia by chance? Great form a counts, thank you for your entry....best wishes,
ken IBT
- TheFourSeasons
  September 27, 2007
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  Thank you.
  Thanks for commenting. No, actually I'm a resident of Kentucky. I've never even been to Florida. But we have beauty in all our states, right?
  Thanks,
  T.