Blew an acorn off the tree-
It fell on my head.
A strong autumn wind
Blew an acorn off the tree-
It fell on my head.
Blew an acorn off the tree-
It fell on my head.
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
^_^
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hahaha .. this is very cute. It's also crazy how you can humour in this type of poetry. Yes, I'm experimenting this type of poetry. Not long before I can create my own haiku (I hope)
All the best and keep writing,
Never ♥
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Lmao
Now this is makin me die from laughter becaus eit fell on top of youre head and yet I would have probably blamed an imaginaery squirrel LOL! I love this Haiku so much and its just ingenius., love the flow depth and style to it. keep up the good work
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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this is so sad, i feel sorry for the acorn too lol this was cute 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Don't you hate that, well it's better than Bird S!&@
Wonderful Haiku, great images I can see Thank you for your entry...best wishes, Ken IBT
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