The candle has gone out,
My dream's deceived by fate,
I'm standing at the bound
Of 'then' and 'now',
But it's too late
To turn back,
Walking on the edge of razorblade.
Eternity is close,
It knows no time,
But through each silent night
I hear your voice
Implore "Don't die..."
The moonlight brings the charm
To tears in my eyes
Each time I come to wait for you
Beneath my fallen skies.
You're safe here in my arms,
My lips explore your skin
That's soaked in the air
Of my love that we breathe in.
But then the morning comes -
I wish I'd never wake.
I'll reach you now,
My far-off star,
Whatever it takes.
Appease my each heartfret
And close my swollen eyes
Don't let me see my sky ruined again,
Just not tonight.
I'm water, you're fire,
And we're one silent force.
We dream and know that conspires
The universe
To make it happen, and we are
The universe.
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wow. this poem really speeks to you. loved it!!! good job and good luck in the contest.
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very nice
i loved the feel
i dont know how to decribe it but its amazing
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This is beautiful... Sad and yet charming all at the same time... You've done a great job expressing yourself here. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing =]
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Awwwwwwwwww. It's preeeetty!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for entering and good luck.
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I really liked this very much. it is wellw ritten adnthanks so much for entering.
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good job and good luck
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