One night among the stellar sky
a star was born this night
the one that shone the brightest then
was breathless to her sight
as mother laid her to her breast
her smile filled delight
and in her arms a baby lie
was you she held so tight
though many years have passed away
you’ve children of your own
to see their smiling faces now
are very seeds you’ve sown
and when it comes to birthday cheers
to give your special day
I blow my loving kiss to air
and send it on its way
so when you look at stars tonight
the moon will shine on you
to wish you have the best birthday
with love from Malabu.
Writings of Malabu©2007
Author notes
With love, wishing you Happy Birthday Girl!
Malabu
Thank you for being my friend.
A contest entry
- Its My Birthday by EeyoreUK.
459 points, ended October 7, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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ahhh this was so sweet
wonderfuly written
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absolutely precious, I expect one for my B-day, Oct 26th!
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hope you remind me girl
for ya...
Mally
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this is quite a birthday wish, you penned this so well mal ,good luck in her contest,mm
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Perhaps "shone" instead of shine within line three?Just a friendly suggestion.A sweet,poetic accolade to the Birthday Girl sure to induce a smile
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Umm
I was still woking on it...shined I was going to use...shone
I like also...and adjusted it so...gee thanks Yevette..and thanks for commenting...perhaps you can say a few words poet
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