Interminable

Dream... Dream.. Dream on kid..

Don't let her get away..

..let me tell her how you feel

...Tell me what to say..

"I love you, I love you, forever and ever and ever"

"Love could never be so true"

"Once in a lifetime"

"Once in a blue--"

Quiet now kid

that love is too much

way too profound

I can't handle that.. just too much

"Then I'll do it on my own"

"And forever will I stand"

"For I am the envious one.."

"...who believes I can change the world with my hand."

Fine then kid

Have it your way

I bet she'll never love you

Nothing..nothing but foul play

"Leave me alone, friend.."

"..I don't need your guidance.."

"I will have my way.."

"And I won't turn to subsidence."

I will leave you kid

hope that day comes soon

like the story of the utensils...

"Run away with the spoon."

Run away with the spoon.

Author notes

That line "Run away with the spoon" Was the line from the song about the cow jumping over the moon.. or something.. I was about to say twinkle twinkle little star until I sung it and found it. xD Hope the comments are big though.. thanks

Hope you enjoy this one.. It wasn't as good as the others..

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Bourne Darkness
September 25, 2007

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absolutely amazing!
this poem is just brilliant, loving, caring!! i can see that you really care for your friend...but they just arent listening...youve tried but now you just...can't...

I will leave you kid
hope that day comes soon
like the story of the utensils...
"Run away with the spoon."
Run away with the spoon.

thses lines here show that you just want your friend to be happy...even if its not with you..

you are an amazing poet, and honestly...i think im a bit jealous...lol...but really, i am. wonderful job!! keep up the good work!
oh and i did have a good supper...it was spaghetti...lol XD