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Love Beget Lust

When your lips move to tease my mouth
             
              in silent bites,

                        your fingers grasp my hips

                                                        {and comb my hair}

sending shivers down my neck

              as you delve that bit closer

                          in conversation

                                    {than naked flesh on Summer skin}

holding heat in stronger hands,

              drawing me like cigarettes

                          and chocolate,

                                    {so rough and smooth between us}

tracing my back to cup my breasts with kisses,

              nails lightly finding cheeks

                                        and lacing stomachs

                                                              {as I goosebump}

you excite my senses

              breathing hot against my tongue,

                      because a whole world dissolves

                                          {for the thought of being one}

with the way you make me smile

              and how the minutes forget the hours

                            in the depth of your reality

                                          {where our love beget the lust}.

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 7, 2007
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    OMG this was truly an awesome poem! I enjoyed every bit of it!


  • Timespell
    October 1, 2007

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    Oooo... I must admit you did capture my attention on this write. The title was interesting in itself. But your poem was exceptionally written and well delivered. The divide between lust and love.. Hmm We love to lust for love, or lust to love for lust... I would say your poem was Love.

    Enjoyed reading.

    All the best

    ~T.S~

  • Angel Eyed Baby
    September 26, 2007
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    I like this poem.