When your lips move to tease my mouth
in silent bites,
your fingers grasp my hips
{and comb my hair}
sending shivers down my neck
as you delve that bit closer
in conversation
{than naked flesh on Summer skin}
holding heat in stronger hands,
drawing me like cigarettes
and chocolate,
{so rough and smooth between us}
tracing my back to cup my breasts with kisses,
nails lightly finding cheeks
and lacing stomachs
{as I goosebump}
you excite my senses
breathing hot against my tongue,
because a whole world dissolves
{for the thought of being one}
with the way you make me smile
and how the minutes forget the hours
in the depth of your reality
{where our love beget the lust}.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OMG this was truly an awesome poem! I enjoyed every bit of it!


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Oooo... I must admit you did capture my attention on this write. The title was interesting in itself. But your poem was exceptionally written and well delivered. The divide between lust and love.. Hmm We love to lust for love, or lust to love for lust... I would say your poem was Love.
Enjoyed reading.
All the best
~T.S~

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I like this poem.


