It is now Halloween night
It always gives me a fright
Then I hear a loud scream
Could that just be a dream?
“What could that awful, bad noise be I say?”
I hurry to the window right away
I look out the window and what do I see
A monster mash party right in front of me
A werewolf with one ear
do you think he can hear?
A black cat juggling balls
Oh dear me, what if she falls!?
A VAMPIRE! Drinking blood
He is sitting in brown mud
Oh and a witch! Mixing some stew
Oh do you think she will she mix you?
Two mummies dancing to a cute mummy tune
But I’m surprised I only see one balloon
I run to my room and look for halloween favors
And maybe I should really add some cool pink savors
When my party favors are ready
I first make sure I’m steady and out the door I go
But what is that I see
The monster mash party has gone without me!
Then I hear a loud shrieking bell
And for all I can tell
Oh my time passed by
Today is Halloween day hooray hooray!
*My age is 9 years old*
A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm all Halloween on this poem! What do you think?
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A great piece, very fun and in the spirit of halloween. I agree with my co-judges that this is creative and a good piece. Best of luck in the contest.
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A moster mash party aye? I love that song still after all these years
This was a very creative poem you've written here. One I enjoyed so much too
Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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I think that you've done a very good job with this poem hear
the rhymescheme is very good, only the flow seems a tiny bit off but that's okey
Anyway, thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
A werewolf with one ear
do you think he can here?
Should be:
A werewolf with one ear
do you thing he can HEAR
watch those homophones..they can be tricky -
The one thing I noticed is the many couplets, haven't seen a "coupleted" (coop-layed, as I call it) poem in a while!
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haha lindsay i love it! I like how you did each typical Halloween costume and described it. Very Creative!
I think that in a poem like this though, you want to make the syllables somewhat similar between rhyming lines. In my opinion, it would make it sound better, but that's just me!
But Anyway, good job!
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