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How insignificant am I?

Lost until we meet again
I stand on my feet again
And stare into the sky
The mystical miracle
The objections terminal
I whisper words for all to hear
The tormented terrify
All the strong can do is cry
Weeping at the essence of things to come
Are you as insignificant as I?

Why do I wonder as what the future holds
I am a meek and worthless man
Withered and never one to be bold
Why do I captivate my own fickle dreams
Crucified in my sleep
Waking to the sound of screams
The screams are mine
Always mine
Are you as insignificant as I?

Late to the world again
My heart cold once again
I wish for hope and stare to the sky
Falling free down my face
Against ash and grit they trace
Tears paths scar my mirage
How insignificant am I?

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  • pink-roses gold member
    September 25, 2007

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    This is EXCELLENT. one of your best pieces in a while, its really stunning. I love the ideas and the feeling of isolation with everything whirring around the narrator.

    Crafted expertly, sir.