Love's turbulent sea
briny ebb lapping
surges swelling
engulfing wet passion
surrendering naked flesh
moonlight force pulling
pounding deep tidal bore
lust frothing thighs
anticipating
sexual flow
breaking
waves
exploding.
Author notes
picture prompt
picture credit to icture: "The Black Sea" by Stefan Bløndal
Image Copyright © by Stefan Bløndal
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A contest entry
- Not a quickie! 10/30/30 (ADULT 18 or older) by jasminerose.
700 points, ended September 26, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh yes, a very sensual write filled with passion and waves exploding..
Nicely done!!!!!
Thank you for entering!
Jasminerose
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Nicely done. A great sensual take off the promt.
Good luck in the contest.
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Sensual with beauty
crashing waves upon the sands of time as each ebb and flow of tidal waters break high as the sea pulls back into the depth of its world...the beauty is knowing the high will come back and the sands of the beach will once more be wet.....
keep the anticipation and sensuality HH love this side of you babe a pleasure to read somewhere very nice to get lost in good luck with the contest....
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The graphic would speak for itself,but you have with your powerful sensuous imagery made this picture come alive with frothy passion breaking into a sexual passionate,whirpool of vivid turbulence! Your imagery is alive!
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this poem is a lot of sensualality of the woman of the night,...lol thanks for sharing and good luck...mm
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