She's so cold
Touching me with those icy fingers
Embracing me and keeping hold
In the air a whisper lingers
A work of art and a tantalizing gaze
A shadow then hides her eyes from me
Her Wintery breath and cold skin betrayed
Her scorching passions, now ablaze
I am the prey here, i soon see
Licking her lips her hands explore me
A storm full of energy surrounds us
Magnetic touches add waves of want
I lower my hand to the wet and stroke her
Icy hands are now probing me
traveling inside and touching the damp
I do the same and go in deep
The icy hands were no match for me
Soon we were done, and we fell asleep
Author notes
it's kinda choppy, and it's got mediocre rhyming at best, but i really wanted to think of something like this for that particular picture. i hope it works for the contest.
A contest entry
- Not a quickie! 10/30/30 (ADULT 18 or older) by jasminerose.
700 points, ended September 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i was unsure about my form, i was trying something new. bad?
Comments
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lol No not bad at all.. very nicely done except one little boo boo.. it was only supposed to be 30 words.. but hey.. I really still enjoyed this one!!
Thank you for entering this very sensual write!
Jasminerose
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everytime i think i've got you figured out you spit out a new form of strangeness, lmao. you never cease to surprise me with your talent katy, never ever EVER stop writing! hugz
luv pete
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Very nice take off the promt. I bet the icey hands warmed quite quickly.
Good luck in the contest.
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This is great, but it's a bit more than 30 words
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