My world cascade in twinkling stars
When I look in your enchanting eyes
A beauty never existed before illuminates my soul
Brings overwhelming joy and new hope mesmerize
I breathe the blissful air you breathe
Feel what you feel in your glowing heart
For eternity, love you for what you are
Forever cherish the incredible light of love you start
If you could fathom how deep you magically touch me
Ignites whispering thoughts in every moment of time
In waves of desire I taste and breathe you
Infinitely as ocean ebb and flow to entwine
Author notes
written by .......rosepoet
Use this quote:
"I feel wonderful because I see
The love light in your eyes.
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you."
A contest entry
- Song Quote as Inspiration ~ Come check it out by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bring It All by Simply Simple.
1800 points, ended February 26, 2008, 120 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was amazingly penned and so touching. Best of luck in the contest. -
Beautifully said.
Soft and loving, filled with inner passion.
Nice take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
This is simple a loving and you have written your heart here. I loved the elegance and simplicity. Good luck in the contest.
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Sweetly Simple and Sauve
Love your choice of words and alliteration. You are trying to capture and to fathom the unfathomaable; and you did a very fine job of it. Love your choice of pic and the shooting stars(while a little distracting)speak volumes. A wonderful entry with gold written all over it. Well done, friend. Walt.
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