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The Moment

I live for the moment
When my pen takes me away
To a world I know very well
And think of as my true home
Where romance lives on forever
Magic fuels this world of ink
All the people I miss
Here is where I find them
Resting in this peaceful world
My grandma & gramps sits on the swing
Right in front of the door
With one spot saved for me
Every time I happen to come through
That wonderful door that locks out
Everything bad, no pollution or mess
Just pure waterfalls & mountains
Adventures that, never grow old
Every other moment is just time slipping by
While I’m standing outside
With the rain pouring down
And I’m missing that swing
Those people I love
And my own little world…

Written & Copyrighted © September 24, 2007
By Jeff W. Baily

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I wrote this while updating my author info lol, I love my world, it makes me feel warm & welcome

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  • Wind 03
    August 24

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    :))))

    I love that! my own little world! is a place of happiness...i feel free to write as i wish!i am in control of my world...i can choose to be happy or sad! really wonderful!i can see my self in there swinging along

    juliet

  • evelynxxoo
    June 14

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    so peaceful it reminded me what heaven might be like no wars going on people who we loved us waiting for us to enter this perfect place were we all can be like children playing happily awesome poem

  • luv2dream gold member
    June 4
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    Beautiful thoughts

    Yes...it had a warm feeling here..i love swings..I still get on them at the parks!

  • Midnight fair,and the sail ship is lost somewhere
    while the calm sea is massaging the warm shore
    memories,memories what drop a tear,or paint a smile on the face
    arrogantly time pass,yet gently it leaves us with a beautiful symphony which we call time's trace..

    lovely poem,like a calm dawn

  • irishmidnight
    September 25, 2007

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    **heart soars**

    Makes me think of those younger years...as a child...sitting on my grandparents wooden swing...racing through the woods ...without a care in the world!!! I absolutely love it!! Beautiful...and stunning write hun!!! Now i've definitly got to check out your others..**laughs!! Keep it up!!!


    • BottleOfMemories
      September 25, 2007
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      irishmidnight

      Thank you, I appreciate your review. I'm glad you liked my little poem
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