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the Shores of My Heart

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THE SHORES OF MY HEART

 

 

She bathes naked on

 

The shores of my heart


Stars shining overhead

Gorgeous emerald eyes

Hair as gold as the sun

Soft, beautiful skin

Leaving me lost

Yearning

Lusting

Breathless


Author notes

Picture Prompt

Picture: "The Black Sea" by Stefan Bløndal
Image Copyright © by Stefan Bløndal

30 Words

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  • jasminerose
    September 26, 2007

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    OH I can see how this hot lady could leave anyone breathless! A very sensual write! Thank you for entering!
    Jasminerose


  • CloudedCollusion
    September 25, 2007
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    A nice sensual write. Beautifully fitting the prompt.
    Best of luck in the contest.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 25, 2007

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    Nice,

    A very potent piece that share your sensual side within this picture prompt inspiration.. Well done indeed, and I wish you all the best within the contest! Peace, brother Timothy


  • moon2u
    September 25, 2007
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    This one is amazing oh yes, I like it even more than the last one. superb!

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 25, 2007

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    Better get in the shower Bro A great take off on the prompt, I wish I was your heart right now Best wishes, Ken IBT

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