Goodbye,
I know you hate it when I write this way,
but please listen there is something that I have to say.
I am a whore, I am a teasing bitch,
but I am going to tell it like it is,
time to scratch this itch.
I sit at night and cry, slashing at my skin.
Another shot , another cut helps the pills go down.
I loose control of my body, senses have become numb my rag doll body lies lifeless:
The poison has finally won.
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This is my final goodbye, my chance to try and put things right,
I am sorry for the things I have done,
I wish I could take back that unfaithful night.
I know I love you, I can feel it in my gut,
But you deserve better than me
Now its time to give you up.
Sacrifice those tender hugs, the arms holding me tight at night keeping me safe.
Just to tell you the truth;
‘intoxicated mistake’
It happened a while ago, and its been eating from the inside,
this awful heartbreaking feeling; guilt,
no longer am I going to hide.
As I lay here, please know this:
I am not asking for forgiveness,
Just asking to forget;
Do not look for my body,
I do not wish to be found,
I am a stupid fucking whore,
Please let me rot in the ground.
Author notes
This is the crap that come out of my pen last night when I got trashed. I dont really care what people think of me when they read this, I hate myself enough.
Option #4
A contest entry
- Personaly experiences by Ntagatf.
500 points, ended August 31, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I can fully relate, this is why i broke up with my bf, i got drunk and a little high but i cheated on him with my ex, he never found out, this happened within the past 2 weeks, but i too felt like i whore... but we do all make mistakes and i've been a cutter for about 7 years so i can understand that part of it to. i love the way you've written this, the rhyme schem is great and i just enjoyed reading it and just as a heads up its good that you dont care what people think but u shouldnt hate ur self for one mistake, for others to be able to forgive you, you must first forgive yourself. Anyway thanks for entering my contest, i wish you the best of luck, keep up the great work!
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I Understand
Oh we all mess up that is for sure. I've made so many mistakes. I really like the way you wrote this poem. What happened then the remorse you felt afterwards, which again is self inflicted pain a vicious cycle that is for sure. Emotions with imagery and expressions of feelings are excellently penned in your poem. Thank you for sharing with me.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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no didnt work
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wow
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stunning. so angry. so wow. i loved it. so different...such great imagary. i would give you more than 3 clappy things if i could...actually if you do it in two seperate comments i guess you can? wow im going to do that! but that was incredible...WOW. XOX
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nice structure and words. your balanced and thoughtful. full of emotion,
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Very intestnes peice of work. It was very well written and I enjoyed reading this. Great luck in the contest!
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