Waves of passion rise
Naked flesh ebb and flow tantalize
Seductive eyes enchants soul
Desire intoxicates senses out of control
Surfing ocean thighs spread wide
Explode in ecstasy moonlight ride
A contest entry
- Not a quickie! 10/30/30 (ADULT 18 or older) by jasminerose.
700 points, ended September 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh yes! An excellent take off the picture! Love the rhyme and flow
no pun intended..lol Thank you for entering!
Jasminerose
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Great take off the prompt. Nice use of rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
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You really took me there. beautiful penning and enticing. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the comp
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