I wonder what I'll have for dinner...hmmm
Ham and salad would be nice
crispy lettuce, ripe red tomatoes too
some bread and butter will fill the spot
but how divine was that apple
so crisp and crunchy and good for me
This healthy eating plan's the way to go
No more pills and potions for me
The apple was just what the doctor ordered
it satisfied my hunger
and so much more
Food for the heart and soul
satisfies any appetite
Food for the brain
keeps us strong and fit
to cope with life's stresses and strifes
Mealtimes cause a quandary
in many households
with many an argument arising
from the choice of menu
oh such joy
Now what's for dessert...hmmm
Author notes
I chose your poem "Apple' to reply too and poem starts with a line from your poem. I hope this is what you wanted.
This is an anonymous contest so please do not use my name in comments.Good luck all
In a list
A contest entry
- Answer Me Back pt 2! by Kylaya Halon.
450 points, ended September 28, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write. Not so much a big fan for ham. I don't eat red meat. But, the apple sounds great. I also find bananas are great for dessert. Keep up the great work.
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lol I lived it. I knew from the brink the you were using Apple. very well done. Ham Salad...mm sounds yummy. maybe I'll write one on response of you Ham Salad...so we can know whar's we're having for desert...lol
Wonderful write, nice imargery. Here and there you swayed from you Ham Salad and ventured more in the Apple, but at least you wrapped ot up with your mean subject. Much luck in the comp. and
May Your Muse Forever Inspire You...
K.V
The Hostess
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