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Kiss of Rain

Soften me with every drop
Give me shivers to my toes
Pour on me with your passion
Whet my senses with your sent
Captivate me with your beauty

As I drink you in
Let me soak it up
Deepen my roots
Bathe in the moment
And together we will create life

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  • shiratikva
    November 7, 2008

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    Nice and creative, good job!
    You poetry makes me feel what you feel.
    It very close to the my thoughts and my poetry.
    It's like a conversation with a rain. Your imagination is fantastic!


  • aArticfalcon
    November 21, 2007

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    SPLENDOROUS

  • Rajaram
    September 25, 2007

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    Rain Rain Come Again. Great Beautiful wnats to play. It is such a great wish that is in the minds of all the human beings. Well expressed and excellently presented. A BEAUTY from THE MOST BEAUTIFUL.