words that cut like dull blades
penetrate, [explode once burried
into the fresh, flawless skin]
like bullets
bringing everything inside of you
out on the floor
for the whole world to see.
Please tell me what you think
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wow, I really like this! It's strong, and oh so true! "for the whole world to see." Just a few words can do so much harm, and change the whole world. It's weird how much power others really have on us, and how they affect or lives and our beings. It's a real mistery. And this piece of yours is so descriptive and so powerful in it's shortness! Great job!
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I know what you mean. You've conveyed the awful pain and exposure well in this short piece. x x x
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Thanks
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