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Sunrise

The sun rises ever so slowly
a million and a half colors
have been painted and intertwined into the skyline.
Prveiously dark, brightened by tiny lights
millions of stars taken place
by millions of colors
and the glowing ball of heat
that continues on with its daily routine.

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    September 26, 2007
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    Pretty ^.^ I'm kind of ambivilent about sunrises. On the one hand they're tranquil and beautiful, as you've described, and on the other hand, it means I haven't slept and am therefore probably wired and depressed but you described this wonderfully, you know I'm digging the imagery