Crimson tears lingered the last time
A seedless flower of evil blooms with it
Where did it come from? Drown me with a question
But the thorns do wrap around deeply
Regrets haunt me back and forth
It keeps knocking me down as I try to hide it
Consumed by what should be forgotten
Keeping me awake and left me weeping with memories
The fire is still under me
Its aggression devours and fuels my pride
I had what's left of me
And the lost pieces keeps on finding me
I searched for what's behind it
But everything's blurry and dark
Wasted the chance to make it right
Still waiting; when will each breath be mine
-death reaper ver. 6-
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Comments
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deeply meaningful and intensely profound... x
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nice work
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Nice flow and wonderful imagery - best of luck in the contest
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timely.
If only we could forget them haunting memories. I loved this line "And the lost pieces keeps on finding me". Time heals. keep on writing.
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Excellent!
Great poem with excellent imagery and mtre. A good choice of words used to paint this word picture.
Write on Poet!
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That's awesome.
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