Hearts beat beneath chest bones and clavicles that protrude too liberally,
much like a lung that exhales only to inhale to see the ribcage come in and out of sight.
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short as hell.
but it just doesn't seem to go right with anything else.
A contest entry
- She's Got A Body Like An HourGlass And Its Ticking Like A Clock--x by Dead Star--x.
475 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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short but sweet
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lol
interesting
vvvvvvvvvvvveryy interesting
i like the quickie
you still love a good quickie.
That makes me smile
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It is short,
but the crazy two-liners that people come up with every once in a while are always my favorite.
Your style is really interesting.
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thank you for your comment.
i dont know why, but being told i had an interesting style made me smile
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beautiful, darling.
i♥it.
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that's not amazing, it's fucking sad as hell
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it's amazing to me.
and other people.
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i meant the idea behind it sucks
sry :]
i like the style
(short, sweet, and to-the-point)
but the idea it portrays is just so sad...
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gotchaa.
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this is amazing babbyyy
like WHOA
ilyyyyy
xx
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short.
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I really like this babe. It's short but amazing iflysgdm
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