Fallen from grace
Deceived by the thoughts of what's unclear
Trapped in a seclusion of emotions
An enigma of what I must become
Slaved upon this Earth
Deviation of what's inside suffocates
All that should be was replaced
Replaced with the wrath within
The heretic bond beyond sanity
A prayer for the soul on fire
Bursting darkly with hate's embrace
The dim light fades with what's left
And all is dark blue
Which leads to hollowness
The grudge's icy tomb dug open freely
Everything lives on with its silence
-vinz v.-
A contest entry
- give me all of your pain so i can cry by Viyanna Rosemarie.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Picture Contest by fairytalelovestory.
350 points, ended September 21, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm sorry but i'm removing this because Prewrites cannot be allowed... unfortunately this was entered before I had a chance to change the settings... So, please, feel free to enter again!! I would dearly appreciate it.
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http://bloodyzone.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Girl-26735115
the 2nd one... i used the 2nd pic on the list -
this is very heartwarming and beautiful could you please tell me what pic you used?
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i would like to thank you for this wonderful write into my contest and to wish you well in the contest. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie




