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Dark Blue

Fallen from grace
Deceived by  the thoughts of what's unclear
Trapped in a seclusion of emotions
An enigma of what I must become


Slaved upon this Earth
Deviation of what's inside suffocates
All that should be was replaced
Replaced with the wrath within


The heretic bond beyond sanity
A prayer for the soul on fire
Bursting darkly with hate's embrace
The dim light fades with what's left


And all is dark blue
Which leads to hollowness
The grudge's icy tomb dug open freely
Everything lives on with its silence

-vinz v.-

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  • I'm sorry but i'm removing this because Prewrites cannot be allowed... unfortunately this was entered before I had a chance to change the settings... So, please, feel free to enter again!! I would dearly appreciate it.


  • Death Reaper ver. 6
    September 17, 2008
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    http://bloodyzone.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Girl-26735115

    the 2nd one... i used the 2nd pic on the list


  • fairytalelovestory
    September 17, 2008
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    this is very heartwarming and beautiful could you please tell me what pic you used?


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    September 25, 2007

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    i would like to thank you for this wonderful write into my contest and to wish you well in the contest. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie