ill cut my wrist again and wait to die.
ill kiss you one last time before it all ends.
this hurts me as much as it does you.
but first tell me that you love me.
tell me that you care.
it means something coming from you.
this is the life i wanted to live.
i died to delf and the adictions of the world.
i stand because i hate the trends.
theythink im a loser because i hate the norm.
but they have no right to judge.
un till they have been through the pain that i have.
they dont know whats its like when know onw cares.
they dont know what its like when your dad iis beating you.
i have my scars and i live with them evry day.
and they will never heal.
and they will no neve know.
the pain i feel.
so now next to my bed ill end it all.
and heres is where my blood will fall.
i am not afraid to die.
but afraid to lose you.
and afraid to lev you here all alone
one last kiss.
and i felt her arms around me.
i felt her kiss as i sliped away.
i saw her cry.
and now i regret that i wanted to die.
A contest entry
- 2006 Prewrites by Virgoan.
500 points, ended October 7, 2007, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emotastic - it's not a trend it's a lifestyle by undyingservent.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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So deeply emotional! Loved the honest words you shared here! Wonderful write!
Blessed Be~
Az
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This is my first time to read this poem. I will be re-reading all the entries like I usually do.
Initial score = 8.1
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing my friend.
VIRGOAN -
Very heartfelt. sad. but so much emotion. i like this. alot
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im sorry but i have to say more its a fantastic piece and i love it your amazaing at writeing poetry and i cant wait to read more by you....
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awsome
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