I don't know if I can say
Everything that is on my mind
I owe you a debt I can never repay
Because you didn't let me fall behind
So many times I've wanted to quit
And yet you stayed on my side
Wouldn't let me remain adrift
Pulled me out when I tried to hide
You saved me from endless pondering
Convinced me to hold onto life
Saved me from the dark and endless wandering
Showed me the existance of light
All I ever wanted was for someone to know and care
I love you so much... thanks for being there
Author notes
First time trying to write a sonnet, so please don't hurt me.
Please tell me what you think
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{{{{{{{{SHERRI}}}}}}} lova lova you!!!! You are such a wonderful young lady sweetheart! LOVE MOM Veronic aka smileywinks..... Have uncle call your dad ASAP
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Woah
I'm glad that you feel that way about your friends. It's good to feel that way, it makes you and people know that you are needed. I'm not sure if that came out right but that's kinda how I feel about it. I'm not sure if you feel the same but yeah. Anywayz it's a good write and I hope to read more when I find the time.
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I think it worked out well... Nice to see you write something after so long ove nothing. ^_^
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