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ღSheets.of.Laceღ

Night fall, silver light shines,
Tracing the lines on my body.
Shadows before me, such beauty, such passion,
I fall within it all and fade.

Hush of night, crys of pleasure carry off into the distance,
Clouds dance playfully around the moon.
Diamond stars sing of elegance, with promises of sleeping,
While that midnight sky watches over, all the innocents dreaming.

I drift away peacfully, no more nightmares invade,
I feel such beauty and grace.
Finally free, finally safe,
Beneath these sheets of lace.

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about how my bf makes me feel so safe... for once in my life I feel loved, appreciated and protected

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  • sublimewriter
    October 1, 2007

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    sheets of lace reminded me of a honeymoon night, because of the "crys of pleasure in the distance" and the "innocents sleeping." sleeping can be a double meaning of making love or retiring to bed. the diamond stars remind me of how starcrossed lovers look up at the sky, an almost mesmerizing Shakespearan allusion