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Miss You

I used to miss our stupid, pointless conversations
I used to miss the good times we always seemed to have had
I used to miss that spark that left when days were bad
But most of all, the most important thing, I used to miss you

Now I don't even check to see if you're online anymore
I just keep on going without a single little glance
I'm tired of having to always give you another chance
But most of all, the most important thing, I don't miss you

I gave up on talking to you, I used to love doing that
I gave up on thinking we could still be friends
I gave up on ever thinking we could last till the end
But most of all, the most important thing, I gave up missing you

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I'm so sorry, but this is so true. I've given up on you.

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  • oneal
    September 29, 2007

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    Hi Lee-Ann

    This is a sad poem, and there are parts of the poem that I really enjoyed.

    "Now I don't even check to see if you're online anymore" and

    "I'm tired of having to always give you another chance"
    and

    "I gave up on thinking we could still be friends"

    This poem has so many aspects that focus on your disappointment, and this upsets me cause a relationship with so many flaws should not be maintained and this is an experience that is hard to bear...sorry.

    Oneal