Allow yourself to love me for it's time,
to stem your lonesome cry of "incomplete,"
be guided by these misty eyes of mine
that never fail to claim the eyes they meet.
Allow yourself to feed these lips all primed
that pulse like hungry leech in murky streams,
to thresh your trembling body into mine
the way you do in your licentious dreams.
Allow me to donate my body parts,
I claim a witches brew of lovers art,
inside this pure white heat lies your defeat,
a burning bed could not tear us apart.
Allow yourself before the eve shall crest
make promise to be mine till end of time,
so lay your new mown head across my breast
and seal the fiery tryst with blood red wine.
Allow me, for I fear the night be short,
to weave a winding sheet about us two
and let those ruby goblets, empty of our sport
be the price you paid for Witches brew.
A contest entry
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450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 36 entries
Honorable mention
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1500 points, ended November 28, 2007, 67 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Thank you for your entry in our 'Sensual' contest. No. 6 in our Rhyming Extravaganza.
We're very sorry that you were not among the prize winners this time, but yours was, nevertheless, an excellent entry which we both enjoyed reading.
Please join us in future rounds...
Sue and Jeff
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Thanks for your entry into the temptation contest.
Lisa -
The title decieved me ~ as you yielded your twist to this .... nice job!
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Very well done! I love the rhyme and rhythm used here. Great choice of words which flow together smoothly to show a picture of pure temptation. Great use of the prompt. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your kind and encourageing words
Ronn
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Nice Job!
Tons of imagrey, great rhythm and rhyme! Very well done!
Good luck in the contest!
Monique -
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Thank you so much Monique, and for the good luck.
Ronn
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WOW
what a great entry in this contest 
Well done and best of luck to you in the contest
delila
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Thank you delia for the encouragement and the good luck,
Peace
Ronn
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Thank you for commenting and good wishes.
Peace
Ronn -
This was different and filled with poetic devices. Well done on incorporating alliteration and so many others in such a clever way. Good luck in the contest.
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