breaking the bond of stability,
formulized eons ago,
when photons played
on neutrality of my heart,
scanning the horizon of memories,
radiant heat from the beginning
that burned fingertips of love,
encased in negative spirals
of disintegrating magnetism,
loosing luster from your shelled leaps
that left an empty core in the morning,
desiring a longer life
that decayed into forgotten vows,
an optical illusion that never existed,
released into the emptiness that remains
A contest entry
- Quantum Thoughts by islekine.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you.
For such a great entry. I love the analogy.
I am tired...it is late but will judge in a few minutes. Thanks again for entering!
*PEACE* -
I like the way this sounds. I have to admit a certain degree of ignorance here as far as what some of it actually means but I can appreciate it anyway for the way it sounds. You have a nice, steady flow here.
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Whoa! Did you ever give this theme a whirl fer its money! You GO GURL! Hugs, ♥ Belle
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